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The Art and Science of Transitions

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on September 24, 2008 at 9:27:25 am
 

Even when when inspiration is your guide, a certain amount of craft is needed to share your inspirations and ideas with others, so let's really focus on the art and science of transitions. As you select, re-order, revise, and remix each other's definition arguments, experiment with these 6 techniques for sentence level editing, paragraph-level revision, (re)contextualizing, and storytelling:

 

 

or any combination of the above. You could also ask: how does the paper you are editing transition from making a claim to supporting that claim? There are of course other ways to imagine and navigate transitions between sentences, between paragraphs, and between ideas in an argument. Try to focus on the flow of information in your peer's writing. Can you see his/her sequence?

 

WeekFive : rough draft workshop

 

the Cut Up Method

 

source: Scott McCloud's Understanding Comics Chapter 3

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