Jill and Kevin: I really like that you continued with the same style as your first paper. I think you both are very good writers, even though you have different styles and techniques. I think you bring it together nicely. Good information and points were presented by both of you. I like that Jill says addiction begins early because it really does! Keep up the good work and keep us interested! A =)

Aldijana: As always you keep me interested with your writing. You have good points and you view things in depth which is always nice. Even though it is a scary topic, I really liked reading about it. It was defintely very informative, but I think the cause and affect needs some work. A few things can be fixed up such as transitions and gramatical errors, but I think you are on top of things. Keep up the good work. A =)

Michele: You are always very into your writing which I love! If you weren't into it nobody else would be. I think you have a unique style of writing. You are very passionate about gaming and that helps, especially for this class. I won't lie though, at times I do get a bit comfused when I read your papers, but maybe it's just me? Good job! A =)