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March 25th Posting Place for the Midnight Party

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Final Causal Portfolios

 

Michele

 

Earl's Graded Peer Review-

Michele, you definitely got a interesting paper on you hands. You provide me with some very colorful visuals in regards to interacting with our fellow gamer through online play. You provide clear examples of how online game play are advantageous and essential to today’s gamer. You touched on a point that I’ve always wondered. Why do people think it’s acceptable to drop racial slurs while playing online games? That’s a case study waiting to happen. Anyways, your paper had some B traits to it. I feel that some of the paragraphs needed to be cleaned up a little but overall you got an A. Good job

 

Sue

Aldijana

 

Graded Review-

Great paper Aldijana. Your paper provides very clear informative information on how the internet can be used as a weapon against children and teens.  You provide a lot of facts about warning signs that are backed up by legitimate sources. You appeal to my pathos because being a older brother of a twelve year old and a father of a six year old, I feel a need to definitely monitor what they do around a computer because of the fear that you place within me when describing the sick predators that are looking to harm children. You got an A.

 

 Dylan Adams  

Earl

Jacob

Nancy and Tracy

Paul  

 

Earl's Graded Review-

Great paper Paul. You definitely establish your stance and your thesis that TV violence leads to violent tendencies amongst our youth. You utilize all the artistic appeals throughout the paper especially when it comes to your statistical analysis (logos).  All your paragraphs transition to make the flow of the paper logical and clear. A paper.

 

Kristie Causal Argument Final Draft

Nathan

The Ripple Effect by Lydia Beljan 

Causal Argument: Successful video games Click and scroll down.

WoW: the Virtual Drug from Kevin & Jillian

Final Project Proposals 

 

Michele

 

Sue

 

Aldijana

 

Earl

 

David and Dylan

 

Jacob

 

Paul

 

Nancy and Tracy final proposal

 

Kristie Final Project Proposal 

  

Nathan's Final Project Proposal

 

Lydia's Final Project 

 

Proposal for Jillian & Kevin's final moments...

 

Panic Room - for those of us still brainstorming and confused about the final project

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