Earl's Paper:

Earl I found your paper very interesting. It has a nice flow and it allows readers to see games something other than entertainment such as excercise. You give specific examples that support your claims. Very nicely done. I grade your paper as an A.

Nathan's Paper:

Nate I really enjoyed your paper. I actually reviewed it in class so this is not the first time I had read it. I find movies based on comics really enjoyable and now when I watch the movies, I have knowledge outside the movies to back them up. Your paper is solid and very informative.  It covers a lot of information that a person who isn't familiar with your topic could comprehend. I give you an A.

Sue's Paper:

Sue your paper captured my interest from the beginning. I've read many paper about abortion in the past but your paper was the only one that kept me interested because you used specific examples from history to initiate your argument. You have a lot of information to back up statements. I feel as though your paper deserves an A.