Like Dylan A. I was also one of those who originally went through your rough draft in class in order to review.
In truth, your paper already had some interesting facts and information and kept me interested the entire time
I read it. You managed that even though it was on advertising which can be constrewed as being boring. The
attention getting statement is great and helps the audience to stay interested, something missing from many
other papers. I also concur with apt changes being made according to the initial peer review and you incorporated
many of those changes into the paper. Using facts to support your thesis and keeping a mainly linear way of doing
so assured the paper was easy to read and had little flaws. Overall "A" paper.
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